Snow

by Tracy Lynn

Grade: Unfinished
Read: To page 18, plus big chunks in the middle.

I'm not going to read the rest of the "Once Upon a Time" series. The only well-written one so far was the one by Cameron Dokey, so I'll read hers, but nothing else.
I liked the animal people, but Snow herself was extremely boring, and there was a bunch of irritating pun-like phrases, like these ones:

"'No worries,' the boy answered quickly, but looked like--Oh goodness, it looks like he got his feathers ruffled."

"...running his fingers quickly thourhg his short brown hair like a --like a rat."